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A body that don't breathe || a short story with moral

A body that don't breathe || a short story with moral


Some people live for their passion, they live just to prove the world that how they're passionate about their work about their passion. Hey guys I'm Suraj and I have brought you a story of an artist.
There are always some questions and we are always existed to know the answers. And if the question is really need to be answered but you don't get the answers then the feelings kills you from inside. If you know how it feels and if you are an artist too then you can easily relate with the story A body that don't breathe



Writter :- 

Sanju aka Suraj is the writter of this story  and yes that's me so I wrote this story when I was so young. I really love this story. I live in India West Bengal.


Story :-


Pritam , an old sculpturer who loves to create wonderful statues . His statues were so beautiful , even you can't compare a living person with the statue. The beauty of his art was incredible . He was best at his field.
One day he invited some peoples to see his art , to show how much creative and dedicated he is to his work. He invited so many peoples , builders , businessman , news reports , artists , sportsman , teachers and more. He was so excited to show them his best work "Maya". Maya was a statue he made . He was full of confidence that no body can say a negative word about Maya afterall he spent more than 16 years to build her .
He was showing his art to the peoples , everyone was giving him compliments and appreciating his incredible work.  Suddenly he saw a man who was touching Maya . Pritam went to him and said"excuse me sir, do you like her?". That man replied " You know what there is something missing , personally I don't think Maya is perfect. If you want to make her perfect , find what is missing and complete her" . After saying that he went away.

Pritam was in shock. He was thinking Maya is perfect from any side afterall he was working on her from last 16 years. He didn't sleep that night. He just want to know why he said Maya isn't perfect. He decided to find what that man was saying but he couldn't find anything wrong or missing. He was getting crazy day by day. 
After so many years when Pritam was so sick and he was about to die , he was still thinking about that missing thing . He was talking his last breaths and a man came to meet him , he was the man to whom Pritam was dying to meet and ask what is missing in her. Pritam was so old he couldn't see him perfectly but he recognised his voice . Pritam asked him to come close and let him know what was that missing thing in Maya. Man replied with a smile " She was not breathing , life was missing in her". After listening his answer Pritam said "you are right I was not perfect  and nobody will be because the god is only perfect and he is the only one who makes everyone breathe." And now I can die happily.


Conclusion :-

In this story Pritam is a artist who thinks he is the best on his field but when he met a man who made him feel that he isn't best at his work  and after that Pritam start finding what is missing and he never found that until that man told him. In conclusion we can say he waste his entire life to find only one thing and he was thinking so much about him that made him sick and brought him to his life's end.

Thank you guys for reading this story. If you like this story then please feel free to share this story with your buddies and if you have any suggestions and questions and let me know in comments section.
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